HowTo talk:Defeat Evil

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Humour: 7 Pretty darned good! I will start wearing my underpants outside my trousers when I do yard work, and maybe I will defeat thistles in my own yard.
Concept: 8 Good idea.
Prose and formatting: 8 Good structure, good writing.
Images: 6.5 Could use a better picture.
Miscellaneous: 7 I was pleasantly impressed by this article. Nice work.
Final Score: 36.5
Reviewer: --OEJ 19:34, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

Endnotes: I might suggest the author(s) continue to work on this, maybe adding a few jokes and revising it for awhile. It's a nice concept. What I liked best were the self-mocking bits of humor -- a real article on defeating evil would certainly be vainglorious, something on the order of Revelation mixed with Lord of the Rings and Ragnorok, with the Flight of the Valkyries playing in the background. So bringing it all down to earth with advice on using a wedgie as an ultimate weapon is great fun. --OEJ 19:34, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

Extra: Geee...if I did it, or anyelse, it would be full of republican or democrat jokes. lol.

Thanks dude 21:51, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

This is it's second Pee Review. I've made a few changes. The first review wasn't all that helpful. Can you please be very specific in your advice/criticism? Thanks.

Humour: 7 Not bad at all, needs a little more though.
Concept: 9 Excellent idea for an article, suprised no-one thought of it before.
Prose and formatting: 6.5 Ok, but the broken links need to be fixed.
Images: 4.5 Only two, and the sword is a very big image.
Miscellaneous: 7 I like how this article is written like a guide for multiple video games
Final Score: 34 An article that has made good progress, the broken links need fixing, perhaps extend it a bit and it will be good.
Reviewer: Randomator 17:04, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

A ryoshenron reference, of all things. Didn't see that coming. Ж Kalir, Wandering Hippie Salesman 18:38, 6 August 2007 (UTC)

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