HowTo talk:Crash Your Dad's New Corvette
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|Humour:||6||Umm...wow. The last two sentences remind me of an alternate ending to Ethan Frome. Unnecessary. The rest of it? Very clever, but the sections need to be expanded upon. There's a lot of territoy that you can cover with this article that you haven't, but you can do so easily.|
|Concept:||9||I'm sure that this runs through the mind of every teen in such a situation at least once.|
|Prose and formatting:||7||The main dividers need more meaty sections, like "About YOur Dad" and "About the Corvette".|
|Images:||7||Picture of the totalled Vette? Yes? No? Maybe?|
|Miscellaneous:||10||Sure, why not?|
|Final Score:||39||It's a good article, essentially. The dark humor works, to a point, just try not to push it too far. Expand on what you have and I think you could have an excellent article on your hands.|
|Reviewer:||Judgement 04:05, 21 February 2007 (UTC)|
Someone added a crash photo, I'm expanding it, and lost the surreal self-death at the end. --Smrt-guy 19:15, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
Done with the stuffed Corvette!--RnR 09:56, 26 February 2007 (UTC)
edit Two valves per cylindar!?
duh it has two valves per cylinder every car does i'm just gonna edit that out myself!
The corvette is a c5