HowTo talk:Crash Your Dad's New Corvette

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Humour: 6 The last two sentences remind me of an alternate ending to Ethan Frome. Unnecessary. The rest of it? Very clever, but the sections need to be expanded upon. There's a lot of territoy that you can cover with this article that you haven't, but you can do so easily.
Concept: 9 I'm sure that this runs through the mind of every teen in such a situation at least once.
Prose and formatting: 7 The main dividers need more meaty sections, like "About YOur Dad" and "About the Corvette".
Images: 7 Picture of the totalled Vette? Yes? No? Maybe?
Miscellaneous: 10 Sure, why not?
Final Score: 39 It's a good article, essentially. The dark humor works, to a point, just try not to push it too far. Expand on what you have and I think you could have an excellent article on your hands.
Reviewer: Judgement 04:05, 21 February 2007 (UTC)

Someone added a crash photo, I'm expanding it, and lost the surreal self-death at the end. --Smrt-guy 19:15, 21 February 2007 (UTC)

Done with the stuffed Corvette!--RnR 09:56, 26 February 2007 (UTC)

edit Two valves per cylindar!?

duh it has two valves per cylinder every car does i'm just gonna edit that out myself!

edit Image

The corvette is a c5

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