HowTo talk:Be A Man

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This article was nominated for deletion on October 1, 2007.
The result of the discussion was Keep.

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Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be A Man37.5MonekeProse & Formatting: 59/24Aha! Moneke strikes again! I agree, maybe the formatting is awful.
Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be A Man (resub)38Andy of Comix IncHumor & Concept: 69/26
Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be A Man34.8Crazee BoyImages: 510/22Another Crazee review.
avg = 36.8 --- lowest = 5.3

Humour: 9 It was hi-larious... in a manly way
Concept: 8 good concept
Prose and formatting: 5 didn't like the formatting (maybe I'm not manly enough)
Images: 7.5 Good pics, but you should have had ones more related to the text
Miscellaneous: 8 yeah manly
Final Score: 37.5 good article, needs better formating but the humor's great.
Reviewer: --Moneke 08:10, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
Humour: 6 Not as funny as J'accuse. I found that I did not laugh out loud at all during this one, thought I did think to myself, quietly, at the back of my head, "hmmm, that's funny".
Concept: 6 This concept is not quite as funny as J'accusse. It's hard when you've made a good article because people are expecting you to raise the bar all the time, which can be excrutiatingly difficult at times. Keep trying though!
Prose and formatting: 7 A few red links, but nothing too serious.
Images: 9 Unlike J'accuse, these pictures are actually really good because you've made them work without the article. I like the Pokemon reference in there. Well, I don't LIKE it, I just find that extremely random, which I'm starting to like. Your style of writing is incredibly sophisticated and original; I love it!
Miscellaneous: 10 Things that made me laugh: the bit about purchasing getting a firearm. You know what they say about men with big guns, don't you? ("What," you say. "That they cause a lot of destruction and kill a lot of people?") Uh, yeah.
Final Score: 38 Look, it's not funny enough... it is, however, a good try, with some good concepts. I know that it's a HowTo, but at the begginning of the page, why say "HELLO, LADIES"? Is this supposed to be a transexual joke? Seriously, I'm confused.
Reviewer: --Andy the Idiot 02:47, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
Humour: 7.9 The overtly-masculine theme with gay references was just what I was hoping for, and this article delivered it.
Concept: 8.1 A how-to on being a man is a great idea, and you did it well.
Prose and formatting: 6.8 It looks alright, but I think could use a little straightening up here and there.
Images: 5 The images were a mixed bag. The man with a rifle was a good example picture, and the nerd was funny, but others make no sense, like the horse and Team Rocket.
Miscellaneous: 7 The article drags on a bit. You should think of trimming off some things here and there, but I'll leave that desicion up to you. If you straighten it up, the length may not be such a big deal.
Final Score: 34.8 It made me chuckle, and with some work, could be a real winner!
Reviewer: Crazee Boy the passable reviewing furry

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