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:Thanks Necro, yeah I think I did let it affect me a little. I just honestly didn't find his humor creative, but maybe I was a tad too critical. It's not that religion shouldn't be lampooned, you should at least put a little bit of intelligence into it. Anyways, I'm not Mormon (not really sure what I am, I grew up Baptist), but it's good to meet a Brother! {{user:skinfan13/sig1}} <small>''00:05 EST 13 Feb, 2010''</small>
 
:Thanks Necro, yeah I think I did let it affect me a little. I just honestly didn't find his humor creative, but maybe I was a tad too critical. It's not that religion shouldn't be lampooned, you should at least put a little bit of intelligence into it. Anyways, I'm not Mormon (not really sure what I am, I grew up Baptist), but it's good to meet a Brother! {{user:skinfan13/sig1}} <small>''00:05 EST 13 Feb, 2010''</small>
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Thanks for reading the Purpose-Driven Life Page and I took some of the ideas from Wikipedia and such. This is my first UnBooks page, so if you can please make it into a good article since I'll be off the internet for the Lenten Season. And if nothing happens...I put it on the UnBooks Request page. I can only give it as much as I can.[[User:MrCleveland|MrCleveland]] 21:03, February 14, 2010 (UTC)
   
 
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PEE Review

Hi Skinfan13, first of all thank you, we always appreciate people helping out on PEE review and giving their time to help out other writers. However on checking your latest reviews I noticed that they fell below the standard that we expect, this is more distressing in your case considering the relatively high standard you have reviewed at in the past. If you aren't sure what your reviews should look like then take a quick look at the guidelines. Also I'm not too bothered about your review of Youtubers as there wasn't much you could put into that one.

Thanks again for helping out, hopefully I will see you around PEE review a bit more in future. --ChiefjusticeDS 23:23, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Bobby De Niro

Hey Skinfan, thanks for the review, and thanks even more for the high score, I'm glad you liked it. However, since the review wasn't as thorough as some I've had in the past, I thought I'd come here and ask if there were any suggestions you had on how to improve the article? I'm not asking you to review it again or anything, but if anything pops into your mind let me know, as for some reason it still feels far from perfect to me.

Having said that, if you think it's awesome and can't be improved, then don't worry about it. --Hugs and kisses, Black_Flamingo 00:57, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks For the Reviewing KKK

Just thought I'd say thanks. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 04:22, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

A gentle correction

You said to a noob, "you, asshole, stop messing with my article while it is still currently under Pee Review. Thanks Skinfan13 06:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)"

I say to you, "you, misguided if sincere user, please don't lobby insults at new people who likely don't know the procedures of Uncyclopedia, appear to be sincerely trying to help, and even if they were experienced wouldn't necessarily know this was put up for Pee Review anyway. Thanks." WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 05:52, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I don;t want to be mean

You said to a noob, "you, asshole, stop messing with my article while it is still currently under Pee Review. Thanks Skinfan13 06:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)"

but your joesephf delocrochx site wasnt funny at all, it was acxtually tyediuos to read, so im helping you out please stop edition an article under pee review once is enough. .thanks you/sig}} 05:52, January 8, 2010 (UTC) The preceding unsigned comment was added by Surfingerman (talk • contribs)

I'm impressed

GoldenShower Rejoice, Skinfan13! You have been entitled to the
Golden Shower Award
GoldenShower2
For donating high quality material to the Pee Review.


For your review of Ireland and for improving so much from the last review of yours I looked at, keep up the good work! --ChiefjusticeDS 21:42, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Sexy

Girl Scout Thanks


luv u

Thanks for the vote. --Fetu+Img 1186786828=Uncle-john 20:00,31January,2010

Opeth

Thanks for the review, I'll be revising the article soon enough. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 06:45, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

PEE Thanks

Thanks for that. i've made a few alterations in line with what you suggested. but since it's up for VFH I don't like to change it too much.

You're right about the lack of a Maths section, but I couldn't link maths and Hitler in anyway. BTW God help me, but I am a Chemistry teacher and we still synthesise TNT and blow stuff up whenever we can. And I still occasionally give an E as a grade - but that may just be a British thing, as may doing all three sciences at High School whether you like it or not. --Sog1970 20:51, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome to UnNews

Che Ape

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Welcome to UnNews, Skinfan13, and thank you for contributing some crap, or otherwise attracting my attention. For a quick introduction about how you can write a decent or better UnNews article, please take a minute read our spiffy new Style Guide.

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Decreux

reviewed it for ya. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 14:44, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Many thanks sir, I will be looking over it and implementing changes shortly --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 12:27 EST 8 Feb 2010

Tropical cyclone

Hope this makes it a little better Pup 02:37, 9/02/2010

The General is pleased with you

Thanks for the DeGaulle review. I've made a start on editting the article in light of what you've written. Glad you liked most of it. A few things are probably Anglo-American differences - yours seems to be the only English-speaking country not to use the term officer cadet etc. Honestly, we lend you people a language for a few minutes and you start buggering about with it!

Actually, I was just pleased the English made sense, as I tend to translate as I'm going along unless I try very hard to think in English. This leads to the occasional sentence with words in the order wrong. If I'd known there were any readers in the US military I'd have been nicer in the History of the War on Drugs article I wrote last month.

Diolch yn fawr iawn. --Sog1970 18:18, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Eh, satire is satire, if it's good, the subject is less important. I don't mind people poking fun at stuff if its funny, and your article is pretty funny. As for the spelling issues, I think I ran into that on the little adolf review also, so i suppose I should just ignore those sorts of things when i review for you from now on lol --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 20:05 EST 10 Feb, 2010
My idiot brother did some editting of it last night that seems pretty good. You'd be amazed at how hard it is to find a picture of a cavalry man running away though. --Sog1970 10:41, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
I really like what's been done, it reads smoother now and the caption under the new picture is great. I actually feel really confident about nominating this for featuring with the edits that have been made. As the french would say, "bravo monsieur!" --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 11:13 EST 11 Feb, 2010

Random Question

Are you in PEEING? You're not on any of the pee review lists. If not, you should probably be...Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN Icons-flag-us NOTM 00:50, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

You mean the pee review user group? --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 20:03 EST 10 Feb, 2010
PEEING If that's what you wanna call it. I realize that was a dumb question, it really served no purpose, I suck, etc etc.Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN Icons-flag-us NOTM 01:29, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
no, actually thanks for pointing that out! I was using the PEE userbox on my pee review archive without earning it first. I signed up, thanks for the heads up! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 20:58 EST 10 Feb, 2010

Welcome to PEEING, btw. Necropaxx (T) {~} Thursday, 02:30, Feb 11 2010

Why, thank you! Hope to stick around and give more quality reviews for a long time, schoolwork providing of course. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 23:01 EST 10 Feb, 2010

VMI?

That's totally awesome, dude. My roommate's in the Air Force ROTC at our college. Keep on keepin' on, SF. Necropaxx (T) {~} Thursday, 12:15, Feb 11 2010

Which school are you at? Always a fan of ROTC schools, our country needs more of them. I'm actually in between deciding whether to commission or not, even though this school is 100% military, we get to choose at graduation whether we go into the service or not. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 12:41 EST 12 Feb, 2010
BYU. That's funny, I thought you were enrolled in the military when you registered at VMI. Necropaxx (T) {~} Saturday, 04:55, Feb 13 2010
Technically yes, I'm a member of the NROTC battalion, and I draw pay (very minimal), but we do have the option at the end to choose. Those on scholarship though are required to commission. We commission roughly %60 of our graduation classes. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 00:06 EST 13 Feb, 2010

Opeth

Hey, I've finally revised it per your recommendations. Care to give it a look over and let me know what you think? —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 17:37, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I've got class for the next two hours or so, but I'd love to around 3 EST. I'll hit you up at your talk page --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 12:39 EST 12 Feb, 2010

Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Purpose-Driven Life

Good job on the review, Skinfan, but... I think you might have gotten a little too involved with it. I'm a Christian too (Mormon as a matter of fact), and I know how I can get when people are trashing Christianity. However, I sensed that you let your bias (which you acknowledged, and I thank you for that) seep into the review. Yes, it was a very bad article. But I don't think it deserved a 9.5. (Maybe a 10.5, but that's just me.)

Anyway, the review's done, and it was in-depth. But for future reference, if you think that reviewing an article will induce bile, it would be a good idea to let someone else get it.

OK, long boring speech over. In other news, hOMG a Christian on the Internet! Awesome! Kudos for knowing a little bit of Mormanity. Keep up the reviews and other good work, I see potential! Necropaxx (T) {~} Saturday, 04:55, Feb 13 2010

Thanks Necro, yeah I think I did let it affect me a little. I just honestly didn't find his humor creative, but maybe I was a tad too critical. It's not that religion shouldn't be lampooned, you should at least put a little bit of intelligence into it. Anyways, I'm not Mormon (not really sure what I am, I grew up Baptist), but it's good to meet a Brother! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 00:05 EST 13 Feb, 2010

Thanks for reading the Purpose-Driven Life Page and I took some of the ideas from Wikipedia and such. This is my first UnBooks page, so if you can please make it into a good article since I'll be off the internet for the Lenten Season. And if nothing happens...I put it on the UnBooks Request page. I can only give it as much as I can.MrCleveland 21:03, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks

Cymru am byth, brawd.

In the unlikely event that an interest in Rugby has survived genetically - today's match at the Millennium in Caerdydd was an unlikely triumph for God's own. --Sog1970 20:12, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Undoubtedly, our school Rugby team is one of the finest on the east coast and really fun to watch! Long live Wales --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 15:18 EST 13 Feb 2010

Excellent


The management has observed your contributions to People for the Evaluation of Excrement and Influencing Nominations for Greatness and you would be mentioned in the non-existent report to the non-existent cabal if it existed, which it doesn't as there is no cabal, now back to work citizen!

On a serious note, excellent work, we all really appreciate your contributions. This is a personal thanks from me and I'm certain it is echoed by everyone else who frequents the halls of PEE. Keep it up. --ChiefjusticeDS 21:00, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh also, I will get to your article shortly, probably not tonight, but definitely tomorrow, hope the delay isn't a problem. --ChiefjusticeDS 21:01, February 13, 2010 (UTC)
No problem at all! Thanks --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 17:01 EST 13 Feb, 2010

Welcome to UnNews

I think I forgot to give you an official welcoming, so here it is. Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 16:40, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Haha, actually, you did, look about 3-5 messages up, it's there :) --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 11:42 EST 14 Feb, 2010

Congrats on your first feature!

IPad is officially featured. Glad to help.Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN Icons-flag-us NOTM 20:10, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

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