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I was the principal author of [[Nintendo]], right? Does that mean I get 4 points? {{User:Pelargonium/sig}} <small>03:07, 29 March 2010 (UTC)</small>
 
I was the principal author of [[Nintendo]], right? Does that mean I get 4 points? {{User:Pelargonium/sig}} <small>03:07, 29 March 2010 (UTC)</small>
:I just got back from our field exercises with the Marines, I'll be sure to take care of it once we move the article to mainspace, but yes, you will get 4 points. {{user;skinfan13/sig1}} <small>''11:31 EST 29 Mar, 2010''</small>
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:I just got back from our field exercises with the Marines, I'll be sure to take care of it once we move the article to mainspace, but yes, you will get 4 points. {{user:skinfan13/sig1}} <small>''11:31 EST 29 Mar, 2010''</small>
 
::I did no editing of the article whatsoever and I'm not even a member of USS. How many points do I get? {{User:Why do I need to provide this?/sig}} 19:21, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
 
::I did no editing of the article whatsoever and I'm not even a member of USS. How many points do I get? {{User:Why do I need to provide this?/sig}} 19:21, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
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:::Perhaps 1000, It's kind of like whose line is it anyway, the points don't matter lol {{user:skinfan13/sig1}} <small>''15:27 EST 29 Mar, 2010''<small>''15:28 EST 29 Mar, 2010''</small>

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PEE Review

Hi Skinfan13, first of all thank you, we always appreciate people helping out on PEE review and giving their time to help out other writers. However on checking your latest reviews I noticed that they fell below the standard that we expect, this is more distressing in your case considering the relatively high standard you have reviewed at in the past. If you aren't sure what your reviews should look like then take a quick look at the guidelines. Also I'm not too bothered about your review of Youtubers as there wasn't much you could put into that one.

Thanks again for helping out, hopefully I will see you around PEE review a bit more in future. --ChiefjusticeDS 23:23, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Bobby De Niro

Hey Skinfan, thanks for the review, and thanks even more for the high score, I'm glad you liked it. However, since the review wasn't as thorough as some I've had in the past, I thought I'd come here and ask if there were any suggestions you had on how to improve the article? I'm not asking you to review it again or anything, but if anything pops into your mind let me know, as for some reason it still feels far from perfect to me.

Having said that, if you think it's awesome and can't be improved, then don't worry about it. --Hugs and kisses, Black_Flamingo 00:57, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks For the Reviewing KKK

Just thought I'd say thanks. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 04:22, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

A gentle correction

You said to a noob, "you, asshole, stop messing with my article while it is still currently under Pee Review. Thanks Skinfan13 06:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)"

I say to you, "you, misguided if sincere user, please don't lobby insults at new people who likely don't know the procedures of Uncyclopedia, appear to be sincerely trying to help, and even if they were experienced wouldn't necessarily know this was put up for Pee Review anyway. Thanks." WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 05:52, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I don;t want to be mean

You said to a noob, "you, asshole, stop messing with my article while it is still currently under Pee Review. Thanks Skinfan13 06:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)"

but your joesephf delocrochx site wasnt funny at all, it was acxtually tyediuos to read, so im helping you out please stop edition an article under pee review once is enough. .thanks you/sig}} 05:52, January 8, 2010 (UTC) The preceding unsigned comment was added by Surfingerman (talk • contribs)

I'm impressed

GoldenShower Rejoice, Skinfan13! You have been entitled to the
Golden Shower Award
GoldenShower2
For donating high quality material to the Pee Review.


For your review of Ireland and for improving so much from the last review of yours I looked at, keep up the good work! --ChiefjusticeDS 21:42, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Sexy

Girl Scout Thanks


luv u

Thanks for the vote. --Fetu+Img 1186786828=Uncle-john 20:00,31January,2010

Opeth

Thanks for the review, I'll be revising the article soon enough. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 06:45, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

PEE Thanks

Thanks for that. i've made a few alterations in line with what you suggested. but since it's up for VFH I don't like to change it too much.

You're right about the lack of a Maths section, but I couldn't link maths and Hitler in anyway. BTW God help me, but I am a Chemistry teacher and we still synthesise TNT and blow stuff up whenever we can. And I still occasionally give an E as a grade - but that may just be a British thing, as may doing all three sciences at High School whether you like it or not. --Sog1970 20:51, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome to UnNews

Che Ape

Reverend Zim_ulator says: "There are coffee cup stains on this copy, damnit! Now that's good UnJournalism."

Welcome to UnNews, Skinfan13, and thank you for contributing some crap, or otherwise attracting my attention. For a quick introduction about how you can write a decent or better UnNews article, please take a minute read our spiffy new Style Guide.

I am your humble servant (in your dreams), and if I may be of help to you, please leave me a note on my talk page.

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Decreux

reviewed it for ya. —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 14:44, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Many thanks sir, I will be looking over it and implementing changes shortly --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 12:27 EST 8 Feb 2010

Tropical cyclone

Hope this makes it a little better Pup 02:37, 9/02/2010

The General is pleased with you

Thanks for the DeGaulle review. I've made a start on editting the article in light of what you've written. Glad you liked most of it. A few things are probably Anglo-American differences - yours seems to be the only English-speaking country not to use the term officer cadet etc. Honestly, we lend you people a language for a few minutes and you start buggering about with it!

Actually, I was just pleased the English made sense, as I tend to translate as I'm going along unless I try very hard to think in English. This leads to the occasional sentence with words in the order wrong. If I'd known there were any readers in the US military I'd have been nicer in the History of the War on Drugs article I wrote last month.

Diolch yn fawr iawn. --Sog1970 18:18, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Eh, satire is satire, if it's good, the subject is less important. I don't mind people poking fun at stuff if its funny, and your article is pretty funny. As for the spelling issues, I think I ran into that on the little adolf review also, so i suppose I should just ignore those sorts of things when i review for you from now on lol --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 20:05 EST 10 Feb, 2010
My idiot brother did some editting of it last night that seems pretty good. You'd be amazed at how hard it is to find a picture of a cavalry man running away though. --Sog1970 10:41, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
I really like what's been done, it reads smoother now and the caption under the new picture is great. I actually feel really confident about nominating this for featuring with the edits that have been made. As the french would say, "bravo monsieur!" --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 11:13 EST 11 Feb, 2010

Random Question

Are you in PEEING? You're not on any of the pee review lists. If not, you should probably be...Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN Icons-flag-us NOTM 00:50, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

You mean the pee review user group? --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 20:03 EST 10 Feb, 2010
PEEING If that's what you wanna call it. I realize that was a dumb question, it really served no purpose, I suck, etc etc.Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN Icons-flag-us NOTM 01:29, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
no, actually thanks for pointing that out! I was using the PEE userbox on my pee review archive without earning it first. I signed up, thanks for the heads up! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 20:58 EST 10 Feb, 2010

Welcome to PEEING, btw. Necropaxx (T) {~} Thursday, 02:30, Feb 11 2010

Why, thank you! Hope to stick around and give more quality reviews for a long time, schoolwork providing of course. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 23:01 EST 10 Feb, 2010

VMI?

That's totally awesome, dude. My roommate's in the Air Force ROTC at our college. Keep on keepin' on, SF. Necropaxx (T) {~} Thursday, 12:15, Feb 11 2010

Which school are you at? Always a fan of ROTC schools, our country needs more of them. I'm actually in between deciding whether to commission or not, even though this school is 100% military, we get to choose at graduation whether we go into the service or not. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 12:41 EST 12 Feb, 2010
BYU. That's funny, I thought you were enrolled in the military when you registered at VMI. Necropaxx (T) {~} Saturday, 04:55, Feb 13 2010
Technically yes, I'm a member of the NROTC battalion, and I draw pay (very minimal), but we do have the option at the end to choose. Those on scholarship though are required to commission. We commission roughly %60 of our graduation classes. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 00:06 EST 13 Feb, 2010

Opeth

Hey, I've finally revised it per your recommendations. Care to give it a look over and let me know what you think? —Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 17:37, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I've got class for the next two hours or so, but I'd love to around 3 EST. I'll hit you up at your talk page --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 12:39 EST 12 Feb, 2010

Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Purpose-Driven Life

Good job on the review, Skinfan, but... I think you might have gotten a little too involved with it. I'm a Christian too (Mormon as a matter of fact), and I know how I can get when people are trashing Christianity. However, I sensed that you let your bias (which you acknowledged, and I thank you for that) seep into the review. Yes, it was a very bad article. But I don't think it deserved a 9.5. (Maybe a 10.5, but that's just me.)

Anyway, the review's done, and it was in-depth. But for future reference, if you think that reviewing an article will induce bile, it would be a good idea to let someone else get it.

OK, long boring speech over. In other news, hOMG a Christian on the Internet! Awesome! Kudos for knowing a little bit of Mormanity. Keep up the reviews and other good work, I see potential! Necropaxx (T) {~} Saturday, 04:55, Feb 13 2010

Thanks Necro, yeah I think I did let it affect me a little. I just honestly didn't find his humor creative, but maybe I was a tad too critical. It's not that religion shouldn't be lampooned, you should at least put a little bit of intelligence into it. Anyways, I'm not Mormon (not really sure what I am, I grew up Baptist), but it's good to meet a Brother! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 00:05 EST 13 Feb, 2010

Thanks for reading the Purpose-Driven Life Page and I took some of the ideas from Wikipedia and such. This is my first UnBooks page, so if you can please make it into a good article since I'll be off the internet for the Lenten Season. And if nothing happens...I put it on the UnBooks Request page. I can only give it as much as I can.MrCleveland 21:03, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

You're welcome, sorry about the harsh words in the review. I can move the article to your userspace if you want so you can work on it and once you're done you can create the article in the appropriate place i.e. The Purpose Driven Life. This style of article typically won't be found in UnBooks, like I said in the review. I'm going to be honest, I'm not too sold on the concept so I'm not really the person to ask to collaborate with on it. But, there are plenty of groups committed to colabing on Uncyclopedia, I suggest you ask around in one of those. Imperial Colonization is one group that comes to mind. I would post this on their talk page and ask for some help with it. Good luck! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 16:14 EST 14 Feb, 2010

Thanks

Cymru am byth, brawd.

In the unlikely event that an interest in Rugby has survived genetically - today's match at the Millennium in Caerdydd was an unlikely triumph for God's own. --Sog1970 20:12, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Undoubtedly, our school Rugby team is one of the finest on the east coast and really fun to watch! Long live Wales --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 15:18 EST 13 Feb 2010

Excellent


The management has observed your contributions to People for the Evaluation of Excrement and Influencing Nominations for Greatness and you would be mentioned in the non-existent report to the non-existent cabal if it existed, which it doesn't as there is no cabal, now back to work citizen!

On a serious note, excellent work, we all really appreciate your contributions. This is a personal thanks from me and I'm certain it is echoed by everyone else who frequents the halls of PEE. Keep it up. --ChiefjusticeDS 21:00, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh also, I will get to your article shortly, probably not tonight, but definitely tomorrow, hope the delay isn't a problem. --ChiefjusticeDS 21:01, February 13, 2010 (UTC)
No problem at all! Thanks --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 17:01 EST 13 Feb, 2010

Welcome to UnNews

I think I forgot to give you an official welcoming, so here it is. Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 16:40, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Haha, actually, you did, look about 3-5 messages up, it's there :) --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 11:42 EST 14 Feb, 2010
I've got to stop smoking that stuff. Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 13:33, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Congrats on your first feature!

IPad is officially featured. Glad to help.Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN Icons-flag-us NOTM 20:10, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

VTM

I'd like to invite you to do a Pee Review of VTM so I can get a better understanding of what your criticisms are of the article on its satirical merit. --Hotadmin4u69 [TALK] 23:37 Feb 14 2010

I'd be happy to. Can't promise when it will be done, but I'll be sure to do it this week. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 18:46 EST, 14 Feb, 2010

Thanks for being R Kelly

Thanks ever so much for pissing on my stupid article. I haven't read it through yet, and I have a feeling I'll be reading it a few times. The length and the time you took to do a bit of critical thinking here makes me appreciate the work you did. More on this after I finish. I'm pressed for time, and I spend the least amount of time actually trying to write great articles, so it may be as long as a week. Thanks again. Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 13:28, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, it's my pleasure! Take your time, no need to hurry through anything, and I'm looking forward to the finished product --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 08:31 EST 15 Feb, 2010

Question 1: You mentioned you expected a meme-filled article at first. Is that good, bad, or nobody cares? Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 13:41, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

it's bad imo. I really don't like internet memes. This isn't because of the humor associated with them, most are quite funny, but a lot of them are over used or improperly used, so they leave a bad taste in my mouth. It'a kind of like a when a good song gets ruined for the rest of your life when it's overplayed on the radio. This is of course all my own opinion, so it's only worth that much. which is course about 2 cents --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 08:44 EST 15 Feb, 2010
For example (so I don't look like a hypocrite) I used the shoop da whoop meme as a background theme for this article I wrote UnNews:USAF is Firin' Thah Lazor currently on the front page. Memes can be used properly --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 08:51 EST 15 Feb, 2010
Yeah, I was after your feeling about the proper usage of memes. I'm currently perpetrating a delusion that Bat Fuck is a secret meme. I don't know if bat fuck insane qualifies as such. Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 14:57, February 15, 2010 (UTC)
Dammit!
I just lost the game!
Pup 06:54, 16/02/2010

Thanks for zee pee

Thanks, it was very well written and contained many good points. The page was first written by PF4Eva, and he did the spine of it, the boxes, some of the pics, etc. I did a pretty full rewrite, and added some pics. To me the 1930s jokes work, but I enjoy history. It would be like placing Miley Cyrus or Ting Ting into 1968 and report on them from that perspective (someone could come up with an interesting page along those lines, Miley at Woodstock or some such). See my "Giant Jew Band" for another stab at such an idea. Without that it would be a little more difficult to make the song stand out from its contemporaries, it had a niche following at the start and only became a classic as the years went by. (apparantlyi the drum solo in live pertformances was 35-40 minutes long, and the rest of the band did take an offstage break). I need to mull that over, the 30s thing. Most of your other comments I agree with, will change many of the things, captions, strike-outs,. etc. Happy to do so. The boxes being in psychedelic designs would be great, I'm not tech proficient to do so. Will run it by PF. The point of hearing the song again is well taken, I'll put the YouTube short version (9 minutes or so) near the top so people can listen to it as they read, that sounds fun. This is getting vrery long, I'll let you know when progress is well along. Thanks again, appreciated. ~ Aleister AIClogo 00:22 17 Feb. MMX

No problem, always glad to lend a hand. Honestly I don't think the 1930's theme really hurts the article all that much, it just kept annoying me a little throughout. honestly it might work well with a lot of people. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 20:12 EST 16 Feb, 2010

Hey

Yes, I want you to work at my UnNews you have recently reviewed (UnNews:Arbeit hat nicht frei gemacht). My apologies I response that late but I've been banned for a while. Cheers. PoliszSir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj KUN 14:32, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's all good. I'm going to be fairly busy for the next couple of days, not sure when I'll be able to get around to it. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 12:08 EST 17 Feb, 2010

Challenge

I just tried some of it out, and I must say it's quite an interesting idea...I don't think I've seen anything on Uncyc quite like it (except for the games, but those suck). I look forward to it's development. :) —Paizuri MUN Talkpage My Contributions 04:08, 18 February 2010 (UTC)

Shhhhhh! :) --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 23:10 EST 17 Feb, 2010
Oh! Oooh! Ooooooooh!! I GET IT! ITS A SECRET! DON'T WORRY, I WON'T TELL ANYONE!!!Paizuri MUN Talkpage My Contributions 04:18, 18 February 2010 (UTC)
SWEEEEET! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 23:21 EST 17 Feb, 2010

Bobby D

Although I have already voted on ROTM, please accept this -

GoldenShower Rejoice, Skinfan13! You have been entitled to the
Golden Shower Award
GoldenShower2
For donating high quality material to the Pee Review.


Oh and by the way, we spell "organised" with an "s" in Britain. --Hugs and kisses, Black_Flamingo 22:14, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Doh, my America is showing again...
thanks! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >}17:16 EST, 18 Feb, 2010

Fix at VFH

A conversation at VFH, and then the bottom photo left, and she actually got huffed later. Just dust in the wind now. If that was your main objection, she's now just a distant memory. Sigh. ~ Aleister AIClogo 16:48 26 2 2MX

Game theory review

Fantastic review, great job. Thanks. I will implement a lot of your suggestions - I already knew the transition from the intro to the details of the theory was too abrupt, and I like how you've explained it. Look for a new draft soon. Thanks --Globaltourniquet GlobalTourniquetUnAstrologer, UnJournalist, shameless narcissistic America-hating liberal atheist award-winning featured writer 08:00, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Always glad to be of service! I'll be on the lookout for that, I think if you expand it, it's definitely worth a nomination over at VFH --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 12:19 EST 28 Feb, 2010

WotM

hi i nommd u fer WotM cuz ur liek kool an stuf —Paizuri MUN Talkpage My Contributions 23:57, 1 March 2010 (UTC)

Tanks dood, you r kool 2! :D --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 20:06 EST 1 Mar, 2010

Creationism Review

Thanks a bunch for doing a detailed review. Unfortunately, I saw it right as I was getting ready to log off, and won't be able to read it in detail for close to 24 hours. But I really appreciate what I saw in my quick skim through. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 03:51, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

It's my pleasure! I was actually just about to leave a message on your talk page. I'll be looking forward to the final product (and will instantly consider a nomination for VFH), just drop me a line when it's done --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 22:53 EST 1 Mar, 2010
What ^ said. Also, I've been tinkering with it based on your suggestions (having problems with the The age of the earth; universe & the third section of The Watchmaker), & I'm sure we'll Why will get back to you when it's done.
I'm glad you liked the false blue-link to "Who could possibly make God?" and the Creationism Vs. Evolution quote, I was chuckling quite a lot when I did those too. (It's nice when a reviewer likes your jokes.)  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  04 Mar 2010 ~ 07:37 (UTC)
Like I said, I'm looking forward to the final product, I think yours was the highest scoring in-depth pee I've done. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 09:44 EST 4 Mar, 2010

If you wouldn't mind doing a quick look through (it may have been moved to Creationism by the time you read this) of our changes, I would really appreciate it. I believe we followed almost all of your suggestions, but there are a couple exceptions on images I want to point out: The Jesus on a dinosaur image seemed pretty popular with the group, so we kept that. Also I thought your idea of having the circular reasoning image rotate in a circle was a good one. But when I tried doing an animation, it was unfortunately very difficult to read, even when I slowed it down to take 12 seconds to make a single rotation. So I kept that as is. Again, I think we followed almost all of the rest of your suggestions. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 21:26, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hahaha, I just read through it at the IC link, and I have to say, I like what you've all done in terms of edits, especially the pictures, that picture of Bush is so epic I can't even begin to describe it! Quick things to point out, couple grammar errors in the new edits, one of the files for a picture under the evolution section is corrupted. I would also make the introduction image a little bit bigger to take advantage of all that negative space, other than that I really like how this is shaping up. Once it's in the main-space I'll be sure to see about a VFH bid. well done --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 16:42 EST 5 Mar, 2010
Thanks! But what grammatical errors did you see? I ran it through a spell and grammar check, and fixed everything I and the program found. But editing programs still aren't as good at editing as people, so could you let me know what was missed? Also thanks for pointing out the pic getting corrupted--the link worked fine the last time I looked at it, but apparently a typo snuck in. As for the introduction image, I enlarged it and moved it a bit. Does that look better to you? WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 23:12, March 5, 2010 (UTC)
Like I said below, I'll go through in a bit and get the problems I saw myself. The intro image is good to go now, good job --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 18:54 EST 5 Mar, 2010

A Ten Minute Thanks

haha thanks Guildy, but I think you mean Opeth, although Mastodon is a great band as well! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 09:43 EST 4 Mar, 2010

UnNews:Kids Directing Air Traffic at JFK Airport

Great choice of subject--a thoroughly ridiculous news event--and thank you for writing an UnNews article that is actually based on the news. You ought to do an audio, with the tapes as sound effects. I heard the kid, and the bottom line is that he was doing the job exactly right--not playing at all--and the pilots didn't seem to be concerned. Your article does communicate that.

Rather than the theme of good-vs-evil (the kids must be terrorists! what do activists say?), there are more subtle ways to play it. A federal bureaucracy's first reaction must be a search for scapegoats; and there is a problem if a mouthy group claims there is. Was it child abuse? A Boston talk host asked how the public reaction would have been different if the air traffic controller were a woman and this were Bring Your Daughter To Work Day. Spıke ¬ 14:31 4-Mar-10

Dreaming

Hi, just read the review, thank you very much for the thought you put into it. Some very good ideas, I like the dream starting off after an article writer gets bored, I didn't think of that. And the expansion of the lucid section would provide space for more linked information (I enjoy putting lots of data into articles, did you find the linky-paragraph in People Who Like to Fuck Naked? A storehouse of data in one paragraph). OK, I'll kill the horse at the start, grrrrr, I like the connection between the front and end--at the front it's the subconscious dream mind adding it and then at the end it's the lucid dreamers own choice. Does that explanation improve your take on it? If not, horsey goes to the glue factory. At the end it does fade into nightmare, at least I thought that's what it was. The Monroe pic is used in the article "Dream", where it says only dreamers see that picture, so it was a homage to that article. The large pic is from "Eyes Wide Shut", a very good movie imnho, and seemed dreamy to me. As for the random, you're probably right, and maybe solveable by a reaccuring character as you suggest which is a very good idea. I guess I see each of the portions of the dream as taking longer in the "dream state" than described on the page, and I include portions of dreams I've had where the "I've been here before" and "naked in a crowd" stuff comes. Before this comment gets as long as the article, thank you very much. Your review will be helpful, meaniong more work for me :>( ,which I won't do for awhile. I tend to do jump around on my own and then on random articles, adding and editing when the mood hits for awhile and then moving on to another, so I may work on it in portions. In finish, thanks. Wheeeeeeeeeeee! ~ Aleister AIClogo 23:52 4.3.2mx

wow! quite a thank you I must say. Yea, I had a feeling the end was supposed to be more nightmarish, but I wasn't sure so I didn't include that as part of my comments. Yea, I think a recurring character in the middle of the random would be a great way to improve it. Let me know when you finish, I'll be looking forward to it. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 21:44 EST 4 Mar, 2010

Extreme Paranormal

Hey, was this vote yours? I just need to confirm this to make sure someone isn't impersonating you or something. —Paizuri MUN Talkpage My Contributions 03:10, 5 March 2010 (UTC)

yea, good to go, the system logged me out for some reason --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 22:12 EST 4 Mar, 2010

Creationism Pee Review--Golden Shower Award

GoldenShower Rejoice, Skinfan13! You have been entitled to the
Golden Shower Award
GoldenShower2
For donating high quality material to the Pee Review.

I know I thanked you before, but this is formal thanks. Your review was very insightful and very helpful. Some of the parts you pointed out didn't work were written or edited by me--and that's great. One of my fears was that if I made a less than adequate edit, noobs would be afraid to make changes--"But Why? is in charge so it must be right." It was great having you point those things out that no one else fixed. And there were other areas where another editor wrote or added an image I thought didn't quite work, and you pointed those out too, and also told us what did work. Very helpful review. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 23:36, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

you're very welcome, my aim is to serve. Hopefully I can keeping dishing up good reviews for a while. I'm glad you all took my suggestions to heart also, sometimes I feel as though I spend a lot of time and pour a lot of energy into reviewing and the authors either ignore the advice or don't care for it. I've got evening formation in a few minutes, but later tonight I'll nom the article for VFH (after getting any left over grammar problems of course :p) --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 18:51 EST 5 Mar, 2010
I've had people ignore all or almost all of my Pee Review suggestions too--and try and fail to get featured, while several of those who made suggested changes got featured, as I point out egotistically in my Miscellaneous numbers section. My three articles that got featured were either changed as per Pee Reviews or (one exception that wasn't Pee Reviewed) tremendously rewritten by another editor. Good Pee Reviews are very helpful. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 00:02, March 6, 2010 (UTC)
By the way, the article has been moved to main space, and can be found at Creationism. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 07:05, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Phrase

Thanks for your review, I would give you a golden shower award, but I'm afraid I went before I came.

The points you prove are fully developed; the comparison of the introduction to something completely other, is a well surfaced argument. I do not wish to aspire to the strains of modernist Latin American poetry, it is a clear definition of what the introduction (as it stands) explicates to the reader - of whom your review is a high representative. I had intended the assault of verbiage to replicate Stephen Fry's introduction of QI (though when I wrote this article, I had been more attracted to QI than I am now). Per your grammar concerns, I can identify which phraseology orphans are extinguishable from the text.

The humour score is encouraging to say the least, but you are right in saying we are connoisseurs on this regard - it is high brow humour. I tried to make this article as applicable as possible, and the sections on Slang and Phrases Stolen From Foreign Languages are both my attempt to show the range of audience that I know that the my tribute to the English language can appeal to. I would say, however, that this article is far easier to understand than [Uncyclopedia:VFH/The Camera Obscura Collection of Hans Helmuth Saltzman (1602-1668) this].

Speaking of which, the Slang section is indeed Anglo-centric. The slang involved is Cockney however, I under that both Codeine's Mum and some non-English people will have heard of the London dialect name of "Cockney".

The conclusive Shakespeare section had intent to revel in irony - "it's greek to me" (also a catchphrase of Obelix, the indomitable Gaul) is sourced from a Shakespeare text. Give any literary critic a topic on the English language and they may well divert the subject to how everything stems from Shakespeare's rebirth of the tongue. The section is brief and shortened to parody the countless hours I have lost having the finer points of Shakespeare venerated to my face. Perhaps with a ref tag, the section could be helped, but it is still anti-climatic, and I will seek to do more to it.

There is much more I can speak of but time is short at the moment, I am tugged this very minute.

This all discussion that I could've spent heaving into the article itself, but I feel that a review is the instigator of all debates. Thanks again for the review. I am off to Birmingham now for family matters. --nldr 16:04, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

VFH thing

Hey Skinfan, before you get too annoyed with the VFH nom that we have both voted on just be aware that it isn't serious. The IP is Optimuschris and he is just messing about. I would have removed the article from the Pee list if we had had a backlog at the time, we didn't so I thought we may as well let it run. If you had worked this out yourself then I blame this post on my new mouse. Also, good work on your last couple of reviews, keep it up. --ChiefjusticeGameCube 19:58, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oh... changed accordingly :) --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 15:08 EST 6 Mar, 2010

John Adams

I already knew that you were working on a new version. I just put in a longer, older version from last year to replace the very short version that was posted until recently. Loopygrumpkins 20:14, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, I just wanted to make sure I wouldn't bruise any egos once I was done and added my page into the mainspace. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 15:16 EST 7 Mar, 2010

Your Americana is showing!

"edit: -2 points for "Defense" being misspelled in your title"

The British spelling of Defense is defence. Just thought I'd rub it in a bit. ;) (btw, good job on the review) Necropaxx (T) {~} {{SUBST:CURRENTDAYNAME}}, {{SUBST:CURRENTTIME}}, {{SUBST:CURRENTMONTHABBREV}} {{SUBST:CURRENTDAY}} {{SUBST:CURRENTYEAR}} UTC

Also, you've got 25 in-depth reviews now! And you know what that means...


Congrats! Necropaxx (T) {~} {{SUBST:CURRENTDAYNAME}}, {{SUBST:CURRENTTIME}}, {{SUBST:CURRENTMONTHABBREV}} {{SUBST:CURRENTDAY}} {{SUBST:CURRENTYEAR}} UTC

Thanks! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 18:12 EST 8 Mar, 2010

And I remember back in the day when you were just a baby reviewer, and reviewed by saying just "goody" or "bady". My, how you've grown. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 23:16, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Your Pee Review and Nomination have saved you

George w bush creationism

The Godly People at Imperial Colonization thank you for voting for Creationism (rightly featured 8 March 2010), and thus supporting America as The Rightful World Power. May God George God and George bless you!

Special thanks for your help; we couldn't have done it without you. Well, actually, we did do it without you, but you helped us make our absolutely perfect article even more perfect. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 20:45, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, looks as though I am the real winner here, I now have a really cool template for my awards page! And no, you may not have it back! you're welcome too --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 18:13 EST 8 Mar, 2010]

Fraternal spirit

The fraternity is a good idea, esp. when focused on Requested articles. I tried looking at the requested article page, and it crashed my computer twice. Twice in a row! It's haunted or something, or unusually full of evil code. I think I looked at it once when I first began my journey on Uncy, but my thought was that if someone wanted an article they should join and help write it. Along the way maybe the list should be well-pruned back. If it's not used much why have more than 50-100 articles at a time on it? Anyway, the frat, if quite a few people don't join within the week maybe it's because it uses too many Colonization rules, excludes women (the fraternity can call women who join "mascots"), and the concept of frat house spooks us liberals and freethinkers away, except for the mascots which make it worthwhile. I'm tempted to join but I'm kind of a lone wolf, or lone coyote or hamster or something, but the idea intriques me. Maybe us loners can dwell in the tree house of the frat house (maybe a page creating a frathouse!) Got to be like Animal House at a minumum. Otter 2:21 10 3 mmx

Thank you for your invitation

I appreciate your invitation to join your fraternity. It's just a shame that you didn't actually give one to ME!                               Puppy's talk page00:40, June 5, 2009 Wednesday, 23:17, Mar 10 2010 UTC

I didn't get one either. I don't think anyone in our family did. Think he has something against our family? Maybe we ought to do something about that.... Godfather WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 19:39, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Hola

Okay, so I joined USS, and I'd like to make a special request for the monthly collab. The Nintendo page was recently deleted, so I recreated it kinda, but I need help finishing it. Sooo...since it was one of the top fifty most wanted articles for a little while, do you think you could make it the monthly collab for this month (or next month, if necessary)? Please? For a fellow (Mexican) American? —Paizuri MUN Talkpage My Contributions 01:04, 14 March 2010 (UTC)

actually, that's a pretty good idea, if you've already started it, that can help considering it's only the middle of the month now. I'll get on it later tonight after I'm done testing out the new blue ray player :) --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 20:08 EST 14 Mar, 2010

Thanks!

ChristianBaleAward Matfen
thanks you
for your vote!

His article could not have been featured without you...

--Matfen 11:28, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Nintendo

I think you dropped a bit too early from the conversation we had on the template issue. My intention wasn't to change the wording but rather not to use this template at all. I don't want to discourage contributors from writing and I don't know how long this is going to take you. You might just want to write it in a sub page as the IC does. Also, sorry for calling you Matt, I keep getting confused between you and Skinfan. ~Jewriken.GIF 16:57, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

yeah, no problem at all. I'll make the template smaller and put it at the bottom of the page. drop by the template page and see if What I did is acceptable. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 14:09 EST 15 Mar, 2010
You know what, I just realized I got confused again as I told you I mistaken you for Skinfan. I'm getting old and senile. ~Jewriken.GIF 19:49, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
Very well, I'll be sure to be gentle with you from now on :) --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 17:19 EST 15 Mar, 2010

Another voting template? How annoying.


Sir ¬_¬ | Banter HOMOPHOBE!!! CUN Icons-flag-us NOTM 19:09, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Uh

So like, on the collaboration page for Nintendo, what exactly should I do? Do we discuss the article, or edit it in there, or what? —Paizuri MUN (Talk Contribs Poll!) 05:49, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

add edits as you see fit, check the history of the page, we've already started working on it. I'll be doing some more with the page today as well. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 15:05 EST 18 Mar, 2010
Ah, okay. I'll check it out in a bit. —Paizuri MUN (Talk Contribs Poll!) 22:34, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

Pee on UBL

Thanks! It's always an eye-opener to get a Pee Review. I just did a complete overhaul. Could you please check Uncyclopedia Beach Local to make sure your advice is being followed. Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 15:04, Mar 19

Yeah, this actually is a really good improvement! I like what you've done so far, keep it up! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 14:10 EST 18 Mar, 2010

Pee Review award things

I don't think I ever told you that I think having a toilet paper roll, crossed plungers, kidneys, etc. with that black stripes and yellow, etc. looks really stupid--I love it. Thanks! WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 03:51, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, like I've said, it was no sweat, I have fun doing pointless crap like that lol --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 21:35 EST 22 Mar, 2010
Come to think of it, this site has a lot of pointless crap. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 05:12, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
I mean seriously --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 18:09 EST 23 Mar, 2010

Nintendo

I've had fun editing the page. A question: Maybe I'm the only person in the world who doesn't know the answer, but what are those little square things in the Japanese name in the first sentence. To me they seem unneeded, and take away from the page, but that's because I don't know what their purpose is. Huh? Ignorant of little squares 1:05 23 3 mmx

Yeah it has been fun, I really like the last parts you did to bring the article full circle. I honestly have no idea what those are, you'd have to talk to Pelargonium about that since the start of this article was all his. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 21:34 EST 22 Mar, 2010
EDIT: aha! I know what you're talking about, this right: 任天堂株式会社 ? What browser are you using? in my version of firefox it shows up as japanese characters, for what I assume is nintendo, I'll throw it into google translator and get back to you on it. sf13 21:54
yup, the whole expression means nintendo, broken down it can literally mean a whole bunch of shit ranging from the company's full name to a bunch of other implied corporate stuff like stock company and so forth. I think it's worth keeping. sf13 21:57
Yeah, on my browser it's just squares, lined up, one af'fer another, marching forever, squares. Al, a few minutes later
Thus proving once again the superiority and awesome might of Firefox :P sf13 22:08
Sigh. I am so lacking. Sigh. Al, lacking, a minute later

Re-review request

You didn't review the version I linked on the PEE page. Please read it and edit the review accordingly. That's if you have the time of cousre :) FreddThe Metalhedd 22px-Flag_of_Egypt.png 18px-Foxicon.png 06:41 • Tuesday, 23-03-2010

FUCK! my bad... shit, that feels terrible on my part... I spent a shitload of time on that... sorry --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 02:51 EST 23 Mar, 2010
It's not a big deal though. It's just that the version I linked doesn't have the "consistency problems" :) FreddThe Metalhedd 22px-Flag_of_Egypt.png 18px-Foxicon.png 06:54 • Tuesday, 23-03-2010
Well, honestly after a quick glance at the two versions there really isn't much difference other than the "consistency" stuff, and I see what you're talking about. Perhaps just ignoring the parts where I talk about consistency would be best? Fact is, I really like current version to be honest, and I think building off of that is probably a better idea than reverting the article and then building from there if that makes any sense. I just feel bad that I overlooked that immediately after telling you I;d review that version lol Sf13 02:59
OK... So you're a gun nut, eh? How about co-writing an article about the M1 Abrams? I find the fact that we don't have articles about Tanks disturbing. FreddThe Metalhedd 22px-Flag_of_Egypt.png 18px-Foxicon.png 07:27 • Tuesday, 23-03-2010
That's actually a pretty good idea. I can't promise anything in the immediate future, but sometime in mid April would be perfect (I have field training exercises with the Marine Corps of all things over the next week and school work has been piling up like crazy). --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 02:29 EST 23 Mar, 2010

What do you think of my new article? (work-in-progress)

What do you think about my article? I'm still new to Uncyclopedia: am I doing anything wrong with the article? I hope not. Still working on it; I hope you'd give me a few tips before I finish and send it to pee review. By the way, my first article is on VFH! Isn't that cool?--M'su Carencro - Talk - Contributions - Blag 21:58, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'll give it a looksee later tonight after evening formation and supper. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 18:04 EST 23 Mar, 2010
Heres a link to my talk page. LINK HERE--M'su Carencro - Talk - Contributions - Blag 22:33, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Review Request

Mind reviewing this? Pretty please.--Grue JammyDirectorEye 4WILLExplode 3YOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 22:02, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sure thing, I'll be sure to do it if it's still around after I'm done with the review I'm currently working on. I may even get to it tonight. I don't know if you noticed also, but I nominated you for ROTM for March, mostly to bring awareness to the fact that you're improving your reviews and I anticipate you to keep it up in April. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 18:06 EST 23 March, 2010
Yeah I saw that.. Pretty Awesome--Grue JammyDirectorEye 4WILLExplode 3YOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 22:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)
Also mind voting for this on VFH?--Grue JammyDirectorEye 4WILLExplode 3YOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 23:57, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Proofreading request

KMI. I'm not a native speaker of English, so my grammar is a bit off, you see.. Also, I'm hesitant about changing the title of the article; "Kurdish Military Industries" sounds catchy to me. Got any specific suggestion? FreddThe Metalhedd 22px-Flag_of_Egypt.png 18px-Foxicon.png 08:55 • Wednesday, 24-03-2010

Yeah, I can definitely do that, it may take me a while to get to it though, I'm backlogged with crap I have to do today and tonight. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 11:53 EST 24 Mar, 2010
Thanks. It's on VFH, btw. FreddThe Metalhedd 22px-Flag_of_Egypt.png 18px-Foxicon.png 17:09 • Wednesday, 24-03-2010
cool, I'll do some touch up and then vote in favor --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 15:57 EST 24 Mar, 2010
Yup, just finished. here are the changes I made. You're welcome to revert anything you don't like --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 23:51 EST 24 Mar, 2010

Thanks for In-A-Gadda-Da-Vida vote

Since three of us got credit (PF4Eva and Funnybony) I won't add a funny picture or anything, just a thank you and it's nice you enjoyed the page. I had fun working on it, and really do like the song. Looked up the song on Google and our page is the 12th item listed! Al 18:05 25 3 mmx

That's actually pretty sweet, I had fun reviewing it, glad to help out! --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 14:08 EST 25 Mar, 2010

Pee Review of Nintendo Love Hotel

I Pee Reviewed User:Skinfan13/Upsilon Sigma Sigma/Collaboration/March2010collab based on version 4464008 of 00:18, March 25, 2010. I hope this helps! WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 22:32, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I must honorably disagree with much of the pee. In defense of my additions, the project is not like colonization, where the page must adhere to one voice or one theme. We're a frat, a pot/beer/sex-in-the-halls frat, and what one person finds meh another will find hilarious. Encyclopediac, ha!, put your encyclopedia in a hat Mister (kudos to Seinfeld). I personally like the Game Cube and Wii almost as is, the size of the pic and last line of the Game Cube included (it's like an advertisement for the fake game cube in the middle of the article rather than an ency. entry about the product). Same with the caption on the toy pic, and much of the last section. I'd write more now, but the guy with the pot has arrived at the frat's front door, and we must let him in. Al in Chains 1:17 26 3 mmx
Well, I think there's some good middle ground here that I'm sure we can all agree on. Upsilon Sigma Sigma isn't intended to be like IC, and I completely agree with and like Al's assertion about our articles reflecting a certain sense of creative freedom, much as if a bunch of drunken frat bros would have made it. I think however that this freedom comes more in line with concept and content more than tone. I agree with Why? that our article's should have a consistent tone throughout, and I think this is highly possible to do while keeping the concepts intact. Maybe just appointing one person to go through and do a tone edit of the article, then someone do the grammar edit afterward would be a good model. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 21:33 EST 25 Mar, 2010
Oh no, another reasonable person. The scourge of my life. But seriously, good middle-ground. If you guys don't mind can I take the tone-lead on this one if we decide to go that way? I'm not as encylopediac-inclined except in the broad stroke (ah, the broad stroke). I did some edits per pee review and anti-pee review, a good mix! Al chainy 1:57 same day same place
Actually I was kind of hoping to do the tone, I have a pretty good idea of how I would want to tackle the article to make it sound more encyclopedic while keeping your sections completely intact. I think going the encyclopedic approach gives this a better shot for VFH. I think for next month's article however, we should do an anti-encyclopedic piece, there's plenty of tantalizing choices sitting untouched on that 50 list that that approach would work really well with. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 22:05 25 3 10
edit:actually I'd love to give you the final sweep-through of the article since a bunch of the content is yours. I just have a really good feeling I can create a single tone that incorporates the best of both approaches -sf13 22:09
I have all due respect for AiC, whose Garage sale article I reviewed and enthusiastically voted for. And certainly no one is obligated to agree with a review. And I recognize that it's your group and you can edit anyway you want (unless an admin tells you otherwise). But if you want your articles like you describe, then please don't waste the time of reviewers by putting them up for Pee Review. If, however, your direction is how your, well, director describes it, then by all means continue putting them up for review. (And in my personal opinion, Uncyclopedia is full of articles that sound like they were thrown together by a drunken fraternity. The only place I look forward to seeing those articles is on VFD). WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 02:05, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Why? I personally appreciate your review, and it is valuable. I've already used it to clean up some of the things you mentioned on the page. Since the frat is new it's members all need, imnho, to speak up for their views at the start rather than get into a rut which is hard to get out of. And look what has occurred: This very discussion we are having has resulted in a good idea from Skinfan, and the Nintendo page, I have a feeling, will be a very good article for the site because of it as well as your, Why?'s, point of view. As for VFD, our frat eats VFD for breakfast, with syrup and a side order of pancakes. Food fight! Aic 2:18 26 3 mmx
Yeah, a new group feeling completely bound by untested rules....but onto more important stuff, I haven't been in a good food fight since the last time I got kicked out of Denny's. Hmm, I wonder if the fight had anything to do with our getting kicked out.... WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 02:33, March 26, 2010 (UTC)
Rules! We don't need no stinkin' rules. Except when we do. But then we can change them! Getting kicked out of Denny's is a badge of honor, wear it proudly if it's a true story, and if it was made up, please go out and actually get kicked out of Denny's, then wear the badge of honor well. Al in chains, a few minutes later.
Actually, I haven't been kicked out of a restaurant in quite a while. I'm pretty boring, really. If you don't count those seven warrants for my arrest. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 03:25, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Would You Mind Doing A Pee Review For Me?

I resubmitted my article, West Timor to the pee review. Would you mind reviewing it, please? I found the other review very helpful, and I just need a second opinion before I know what direction I should go with my article. Thanks and may the Nine Full Moons Of Shang-el-too be with you, fellow comrade. M'su Carencro - Talk - Contributions - Blag 02:11, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm actually about to head out for training with the Marine Corps for the next few days, the earliest I can promise getting to this would be Tuesday next week. If you can wait that long, I would be happy to review this for you, as I said last time. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 22:13 EST 26 Mar, 2010
I'd be happy to wait that long; I have waited for longer things. My 'Legend Of The Seeker Complete Season One On DVD With Extra Bonus Features' took two weeks to arrive on mail! M'su Carencro - Talk - Contributions - Blag 02:21, March 27, 2010 (UTC)
lol, I guess 4 days shouldn't be too painful then :) -sf13 22:25

Hello Round-eye

Asbestos Red Lights

Here is a pack of cigs left over from the garage sale. They are actually ganja. Smoke them and write many articles. Thanks, your vote is very appreciated. Al en'chain 23:23 28 3 mmx

Hi, nice work on the Nintendo page. I just got back on line and made some edits (the ad for the Cube of Games was misformatted on my screen, so I took out the breaks and now it seems fine, hopefully on your end too -- the ending needed something extra or the last line was left hanging -- put back a variation of the round-eye dusty-relative wind-dance, to me that's the funniest joke on the page, at least of my doing -- tweek to Godzilla to add honorable, etc.). The page turned out well, and maybe a couple of other tweeks when we are on at the same time. Congrats! Al 11:07 27 3 mmx

p.s. changed "dusty-relative" to "dusty-ancestor", which I think makes the meaning clearer. And it adds one layer of meaning:The atomic bomb not only made dust of their living ancestors, but of any unlucky ancestor corpse in a cemetery near groun-zero. Yuuuccckkkkk, but proabably humourously yucky.

USS

I was the principal author of Nintendo, right? Does that mean I get 4 points? —Paizuri MUN (Talk Contribs Poll!) 03:07, 29 March 2010 (UTC)

I just got back from our field exercises with the Marines, I'll be sure to take care of it once we move the article to mainspace, but yes, you will get 4 points. --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 11:31 EST 29 Mar, 2010
I did no editing of the article whatsoever and I'm not even a member of USS. How many points do I get? WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 19:21, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
Perhaps 1000, It's kind of like whose line is it anyway, the points don't matter lol --Sir Skinfan13 Talk {< CUN RotM FBotM VFH ΥΣΣ Maj. SK >} 15:27 EST 29 Mar, 201015:28 EST 29 Mar, 2010
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