Just wanted to get a second opinion on what people think of this type of article. No offense to the first reviewer, by the way. There's no I inRAPE(lol contribs)22:42 Aug 19, 2009 22:42, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
It's getting late and I'm tired, so I'll do it tomorrow morning. InMooseWeTrust 00:35, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
Does that mean I can do it? Or do I have to reserve it for you. I don't mind, either way. –zh 07:12 August 20
It definitely means that I can do it. It's morning now, so I'll start now. InMooseWeTrust 12:09, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
I started out thinking it would be a funny commercial about bike insurance. There could be a lot of funny content there, but you had me disappointed.
It's a good concept, but you ruined it by changing it from bike insurance to who knows what.
Prose and formatting:
Very poorly written.
The pictures are all ripped off of TV commercials most of us hate watching, and they're not even good quality. The lady is ugly but you didn't write anything about that, either.
Stop using homosexuality in such a negative connotation. It's not funny; it just makes you seem like an asshole.
This is terrible and I'm nominating it for deletion.