|Hcomment= pretty funny but could be funnier. maybe write sections on different products that you could sell?
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|Ccomment= A really cleaver idea and written well
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|Pcomment= well written and formatted no faults here (apart from the spelling of picture which i changed)
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|Icomment= the quarters were cleaver and i liked the smashed computer. good work
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|Fcomment= this is a very good idea and i would definitely continue it but it needs a lot more work. Try writing sections about various other things that you could deceive people into buying. also include appropriate images for these sections
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|Signature= --[[User:Bonner|Bonner]] 19:11, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
NOTE TO REVIEWER: I have not completed the article yet but am checking to see how good the article is so far. If you never reviewed an article before, please don't review this one, I want a reviewer who will make the article better. I'd also like to ask the reviewer if it I should continue working on this article or if I should redirect to HowTo:Sell Money on eBay? Thank you! --SirManforman 18:10, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
PLEASE, somebody, not a neewbie, review it, it's been a day, and no one has reviewed it. --SirManforman 22:17, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
pretty funny but could be funnier. maybe write sections on different products that you could sell?
Concept:
9
A really cleaver idea and written well
Prose and formatting:
9
well written and formatted no faults here (apart from the spelling of picture which i changed)
Images:
9
the quarters were cleaver and i liked the smashed computer. good work
Miscellaneous:
10
Not Applicable
Final Score:
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this is a very good idea and i would definitely continue it but it needs a lot more work. Try writing sections about various other things that you could deceive people into buying. also include appropriate images for these sections
18:10, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
22:17, 18 June 2007 (UTC)
