UnReviews talk:The Simpsons Skateboarding

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Pee Review

Humour: 6 The quotes chosen on the side were a nice touch, but they ultimately gave away the only funny statements in the article; maybe pick your favourite two and nix the rest. A few of the weaker quips in the body of this might be improved with a second look by someone else - the instincts for humor are evident, but not executed.
Concept: 5 In concept, this is much like the reviews I've seen on obscure blogs everywhere. A game so awful would seem to offer itself up well for lampooning, but most of this article is just venom, makes a lot of cutting remarks, but doesn't necessarily succeed in making fun of it.
Prose and formatting: 5 Okay; could be better. A few words ("generic", "dull", "uninspired", "rip-off") are repeated - thesaurus time! Too, some of the information is repeated numerous times through the article. Remember: just because something is worth saying, doesn't mean you have to say it over and over. Cut down the intro, perhaps; that should help.
Images: 8 A fair assortment of screen caps with captions to make some sense of them. Well-chosen.
Miscellaneous: 6.3 Used average
Final Score: 30.3 This review could afford to be whittled down to avoid needless repetition; give a sober drunken second thought to the jokes here. Otherwise, good hustle.
Reviewer: Rpm 04:31, February 11, 2011 (UTC)
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